Winning “Journalism” Essay: good writing, correct grammar, but lacks brevity

Columnist: Sione Ake Mokofisi – Part VI

26 June, 2020. A new classroom building for Beulah Primary School was commissioned by Mr. Tesimale Latu, Seventh-Day Adventist Church former Director of Education this afternoon, June 26, 2020 at Beulah.

19 June, 2020. Journalists have been barred from entering the University of the South Pacific in Fiji today as the full council meets to resolve an impasse at the regional institution.

Mei Lokiakó ki he Fe‘auhi ‘a e Mītiá Manakoá

Fa‘u-tohi: Sione Ake Mokofisi – Konga V

14 Sune, 2020. ‘Oku lolotonga palani mo fokotuʻutuʻu ‘e he Potungāue Ako moe Ako Ngāué ha ngaahi founga ako kehekehe ke fakahoko atu ai ‘a e ngaahi lēsoní maʻae fānau akó ‘i ‘api, ‘o ka tāpuni ‘a e ngaahi akó ‘i ha hoko mai ‘a e COVID-19.

16 Sune, 2020. Ko e tuʻunga moʻui lelei ‘a e fānau akó ko e kaveinga mahuʻinga ia ki he Potungāue Ako mo e Ako Ngāué.

Kōlomu: Lea Tongá ‘i he Senituli 21

Ngāue‘i ke Mo‘ui, Manakoá, pea Fakalakalaka e Lea Tongá

3 Sune, 2020. ‘Oku hokohoko atu ‘a e ola lelei ‘a e feinga ako ‘a e fanau ako Tonga ‘i muli neongo ‘a e ngaahi fakafe’atungia mei he fakataputapui ‘o e COVID-19.